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A mystical land,
Born out of trees, and rock
And cloud.
Crags, split and fissured,
Ancient and wrinkled
Passed by, as the land elevated
To look onto a different world.

It was six-thirty when the rain poured,
Clouds opening, like daffodils in Spring,
And the alpine smell lingered in my mouth.
So fresh, so light, so clean.

Countryside blooming,
The pine trees stood tall and proud,
Only to be taked down in their prime
And used for carpentry.

And I felt naked,
In this land of eternal peace,
No guns, no war, no weapons.
Fragile in a land of hope.
Torn in a land of certainty.

It was the human cost
To this paradise, that caused
Thw downfall of the high.
Alone, but no forgotten,

Was this land, now so far away.
©2005-2009 ~cecilblueberry
:iconcecilblueberry:

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Well, part nature/physical appearances, part human/check my journal-ness.
Enjoy - please tell me what you think - I want my work to be appreciated

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:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
I love it :D Very well done, my experience of it was just the same :w00t:

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:iconcecilblueberry:
Thanks so much, i love you so much cos we always feel the same things, sort of! :hug:

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Why are my heart and head at war?
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
:glomp:

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
Check out my Gallery
:iconcecilblueberry:
:w00t: for pysicic-ness!

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Why are my heart and head at war?
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
Wo0o

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
Check out my Gallery
:iconduveau23:
wow, it has the imagery, sounds and smells that heaney would be proud of! I know I am.

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"Lovers and madmen have such seething brains"
- A Midsummer Night's Dream, Act V, Scene I.
:iconcecilblueberry:
Thanks so much, thats so sweet. Bless ya! Heaney, ha ha, stop!

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Why are my heart and head at war?

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